N Judah Haikus
too afraid to scream
back door please, back door
i keep on riding
during the delay
some people read and others
watch some people read
the metallic worm
funnels through our cement tomb
right steps going down
the fat driver eats
Taco Bell and KFC
the same company
you are beautiful
the way you lean on the glass
with neck like dove's crane
the punks always smell
that is their statement i guess
please take a shower
automatic mode
is a mode in which things run
according to fate
i get off the train
still thinking about your face
we would get along
13 Comments:
uuuuuuuuuuuuh...
these are really great
like sweet and sour chicken or
oak trees in Summer
ITs good stuff that makes me smile, happy.
Finally, something a person can feel as they read through these many blogs! I love it!
:) hiii
nice blog ;)
I liked your poem. I have ridden the N Judah many times.
nice ones
Cyril Alex
Sorry that I can't help with your Wednesday, March 8 2006 blog mentioned situation. (of course I'm married). But i did want to commend you on the enjoyable Haiku poem.
Its a interesting poem.
This blog is so original and heartfelt--I really enjoy it. I tried putting haiku's on mine one time and got the deafening roar of...no comments. You're brave!
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wow...you know...even when i wasn't afraid to yell back door please, back door, i was still riding because i wasn't heard...hahah
brings back lots of memeories these haikus of your
hey that was really nice...it has the flow bro ;)
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