Monday, March 06, 2006

N Judah Haikus

too afraid to scream
back door please, back door
i keep on riding


during the delay
some people read and others
watch some people read


the metallic worm
funnels through our cement tomb
right steps going down


the fat driver eats
Taco Bell and KFC
the same company


you are beautiful
the way you lean on the glass
with neck like dove's crane


the punks always smell
that is their statement i guess
please take a shower


automatic mode
is a mode in which things run
according to fate


i get off the train
still thinking about your face
we would get along

13 Comments:

At Monday, March 06, 2006 5:53:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

uuuuuuuuuuuuh...

 
At Monday, March 06, 2006 6:14:00 PM, Blogger RockstotheChest said...

these are really great
like sweet and sour chicken or
oak trees in Summer

 
At Tuesday, March 07, 2006 4:35:00 AM, Blogger High Power Rocketry said...

ITs good stuff that makes me smile, happy.

 
At Tuesday, March 07, 2006 12:26:00 PM, Blogger Ella Marie said...

Finally, something a person can feel as they read through these many blogs! I love it!

 
At Wednesday, March 08, 2006 12:23:00 AM, Blogger SAIRUS...®`™ said...

:) hiii

nice blog ;)

 
At Wednesday, March 08, 2006 12:03:00 PM, Blogger CM said...

I liked your poem. I have ridden the N Judah many times.

 
At Wednesday, March 08, 2006 1:32:00 PM, Blogger சிறில் அலெக்ஸ் said...

nice ones

Cyril Alex

 
At Wednesday, March 08, 2006 3:20:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Sorry that I can't help with your Wednesday, March 8 2006 blog mentioned situation. (of course I'm married). But i did want to commend you on the enjoyable Haiku poem.

 
At Wednesday, March 08, 2006 7:38:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Its a interesting poem.

 
At Wednesday, March 08, 2006 8:59:00 PM, Blogger Mike's Drumbeats said...

This blog is so original and heartfelt--I really enjoy it. I tried putting haiku's on mine one time and got the deafening roar of...no comments. You're brave!

 
At Thursday, March 09, 2006 6:14:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

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At Friday, March 10, 2006 1:29:00 AM, Blogger Ronsaren said...

wow...you know...even when i wasn't afraid to yell back door please, back door, i was still riding because i wasn't heard...hahah

brings back lots of memeories these haikus of your

 
At Friday, March 10, 2006 4:09:00 AM, Blogger Sameer Ahmed said...

hey that was really nice...it has the flow bro ;)

 

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